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Post by Simply "V" on Oct 23, 2008 14:10:14 GMT 1
Oooo, the purple certainly does look awesome! And I see what you mean about the knee. Magda looks beautiful Mariam. Good job.
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Oct 23, 2008 15:15:36 GMT 1
Hmm, I still think the one leg looks much shorter than the other one. She looks great in purple though!
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Keeley
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Post by Keeley on Oct 25, 2008 2:35:18 GMT 1
Hey everyone! I finally made it home and was able to work on the art project. Here's my current version. Anyone have any suggestions to make it better? Thanks in advance!!
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Post by gems on Oct 25, 2008 11:00:16 GMT 1
It's very cool Keeley! The only problem I have is there is more than one colour showing: the bit of purple in her hair shouldn't be in colour if your chosen colour is pink) Also, I think the addition of the skulls is really awesome but the coffin and cross are a bit much. Maybe just keep the skulls, lying against the tree or something but get rid of the other stuff..
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Post by Simply "V" on Oct 25, 2008 13:45:40 GMT 1
If you take gems suggestions then I think that you'll have completed your assignment! Really nice one, Keeley.
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Oct 25, 2008 14:15:30 GMT 1
Yep, I agree with gems' advice. Here's a second, completely different entry. I think I like this one better. Suggestions?
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Post by gems on Oct 25, 2008 15:35:45 GMT 1
Oh gosh, very creative Alia! It looks gorgeous! The only thing is, I don't think the stereo is necessary. I reckon the fan is enough I absolutely adore the hair/pose/expression though! Such awesome entries everyone, so far!
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Keeley
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Post by Keeley on Oct 25, 2008 16:31:27 GMT 1
Thanks Gems. I noticed the hair color difference after I posted it. They were originally the same color, so I fixed it. How's this?
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Oct 25, 2008 19:31:15 GMT 1
Looks great to me Keeley! I redid mine too. I agree that the stereo threw the look off a little. I also thought since I'm only using red, why not add rouge?
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Post by gems on Oct 25, 2008 20:52:14 GMT 1
They both look stunning! great work girls!
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Post by Simply "V" on Oct 26, 2008 3:03:29 GMT 1
You all are knocking 'em outta the ball park here! Wowzer, these girls are sporting their colors amazingly. Keep 'em coming ladies. You're doing an excellent job.
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Post by duckduckcaboose on Oct 26, 2008 16:16:40 GMT 1
Alia and Keeley... I think y'all just got better grades than me, lol.
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Oct 27, 2008 2:49:55 GMT 1
Hmm, I thought it needed another little accent of red, so I added this. I know I keep making revisions, but lately I've been totally obsessive-compulsive about making sure something is my very best work before I turn it in. Now if only that were true with my actual schoolwork. If there's ANYTHING AT ALL you think I should change, please tell me. PICK IT TO BITS!
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Post by gems on Oct 27, 2008 13:06:25 GMT 1
It's great to see you all work so hard on these! but Alia, I really think it looked so amazing without the rose...I think the picture had all the red it needed before <3 Less, after all, is more
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Post by duckduckcaboose on Oct 27, 2008 19:32:15 GMT 1
I think the red actually takes some of the focus away. It's unnecessary, I think this is definitely a case of less is more.
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