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Post by nhstitan18 on Oct 6, 2008 2:41:41 GMT 1
thanks for the tips on the hands. I managed to fix one of them but not the other hand. The hand isn't supposed to be on the back of her head but hanging in mid air but it is a thick pinky lol Oh well...the one hand is better
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Post by Simply "V" on Oct 7, 2008 22:48:07 GMT 1
I like the 'fix' Ashlee and forgot to mention earlier that I also like that 'shoulder shrug' she's got going. LOL I think the 'thick pinky' will pass for a hand hanging in mid air . Good job!
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Post by Be! on Oct 19, 2008 23:40:23 GMT 1
Ok - Art critiques. What do you guys think? Pink Blue Green
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Post by duckduckcaboose on Oct 19, 2008 23:54:28 GMT 1
The pink makes it look like her legs just appeared out of nowhere, but I like the green or the blue!
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Post by gems on Oct 20, 2008 0:09:43 GMT 1
I really like the green (though I would say, you could move her so she is leaning against the tree...that would be better i think) also, i think the pink one is really pretty but i agree with Duck, the legs look odd..maybe you could change the colours and have the tights in b&w but the jumper/dress in pink? You can change it's colour so even if it isn't pink in game, on photoshop you can make it as pink as you want
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Post by Be! on Oct 20, 2008 0:30:33 GMT 1
Alrighty - I changed it and that's going to be my final. Thanks for the help!
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Oct 20, 2008 22:43:15 GMT 1
I completed a possible entry. I picked the color to match Ethele's eyes, but since you can't see them, it ended up looking sort of sparse.
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Post by gems on Oct 20, 2008 23:06:07 GMT 1
It looks beautiful, Alia! I especially love the blush <3
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Post by duckduckcaboose on Oct 21, 2008 4:37:24 GMT 1
I really like it, actually. I don't think it looks sparse at all, Alia! I had kinda the same problem with mine. For Lauronica, she has blue eyes so I did blue headband, shorts and shoes... but her eyes are too small and the headband was really light. Try and see if your editing program has a "color enhance" feature. If not, I've saved your picture and I used the color enhance that I have. I can send it to you.
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Post by mariam? on Oct 21, 2008 15:16:09 GMT 1
This is a possible entry for meh. what do you guys think? :/
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Post by gems on Oct 21, 2008 18:30:10 GMT 1
I <3 it Mariam! So cool The broomstick! haha awesome detial! Not sure I would go with red for the colour though...maybe a more funky colour like purple or something? I dunno...other than that its sooooooooo awesome!!! ;D
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Post by duckduckcaboose on Oct 21, 2008 19:47:12 GMT 1
The one thing that I don't like about the picture is the angle of her foot on the left (I guess technically Magda's right foot?). It looks unnatural~ almost like it's broken or something. I don't know... maybe I'm just being picky. Her face/outfit/the rest of her body looks AMAZING, though.
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Post by Simply "V" on Oct 22, 2008 0:02:31 GMT 1
I love the blush too Alia, Ethele looks so vulnerable standing there in the dark woods. I would suggest though that you apply a little more contrast to the picture. You want that soft color to stand out girl! Mariam I like the concept, it's tops. And I think red as color choice works but a brighter red would pop out more. The forest is dark enough. Also, I think maybe a bright red lipstick would bring Magda into the mix a little more. And finally the broom...I almost missed it girl. How if you make the 'tie' (for lack of the proper word) on the broom red sos we don't miss it. But all in all, you've got a really good concept and I love that pose. Psst_I almost forgot, duck is onto something about that foot but I don't think it's the angle. Unless Magda is tres short, I think her leg needs to be longer.
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Post by mariam? on Oct 22, 2008 15:32:17 GMT 1
i changed the colour, and adjusted the foot. I don't think the leg looks too short, I just think it's how she's sitting and the fact that her knee isn't on show.
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Post by gems on Oct 22, 2008 17:05:15 GMT 1
The purple looks tres awesome! Also, I'm glad you moved the broomstick so it's now leaning against the tree, I forgot to mention that before o.o and I agree, the leg pose looks fine to me, very creative
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