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Post by Simply "V" on Dec 8, 2008 22:27:57 GMT 1
Sssweet! Ethele is a little minx eh? Who woulda thunk it! Alia I really like how you incorporated her personality into this; seeing Miz Ethele in action is a little scary. I have to agree with your peer and Ms Colby though, the young wizard's pose doesn't really show him reacting to her sirene's song.
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Dec 8, 2008 23:33:47 GMT 1
I tried to make him look dazed and looking like he's in a trance... but you guys are right, it probably would look better if he looked more lovestruck. Thanks for the advice! EDIT: How's this?
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Post by gems on Dec 9, 2008 12:54:39 GMT 1
It's a keeper! I like the reaction much better now, it looks like she's shot a burst of song straight into his heart.. the guy doesn't stand a chance
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Post by Simply "V" on Dec 11, 2008 0:06:27 GMT 1
Yep, much better! He's totally lost now poor boy.
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Jan 1, 2009 18:06:51 GMT 1
Ehh...
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Keeley
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Post by Keeley on Jan 1, 2009 19:20:15 GMT 1
Oooh, I like the different pictures...especially the one of her making the potion. But I think the text is too much. Skimming through it trying to figure out what the potion does gives me a bit of a headache. Especially since it's separated in big chunks by your potion-making girl.
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Jan 1, 2009 22:11:39 GMT 1
Looking at it again, yeah you're right. I don't know what I was thinking before. I changed my first post.
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Post by Keeley on Jan 1, 2009 22:38:35 GMT 1
I like that much better. Now I need to work on my own entry. I just got back from the holiday vacation today.
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Post by gems on Jan 2, 2009 0:20:46 GMT 1
Alia, I totally love love the pic of Ethele making the potion. I think that looks amazing <3 Though I agree with Keeley about the text, I don't think the explanation is really needed.. a slogan isn't required and the potion name kinda implies what the contents of it does, as does the second frame of Ethele. Which actually, if you remove the text means you'd be able to lower the standing Ethele so that she is actually on the ground (at the moment she's kinda hovering..) The right side of the pic does bug me a little. I think the fire effect looks great but I'm not so keen on how big Ethele's head looks.. it's not really in proportion to her body and her expression looks like she's afraid of the potion she's created. When I think of fire, I envision ferocious power, an eruption of fury... a real sense of inner strength ... which her face totally does not give off.. Love the dress though and the ingredients list (i was hoping someone would use pixie dust )
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Jan 3, 2009 2:40:15 GMT 1
Is this any better?
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Post by gems on Jan 3, 2009 12:32:01 GMT 1
Haha yes!! Ethele looks evil (which is pretty much perfect for fire )
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Post by mariam? on Jan 24, 2009 18:54:01 GMT 1
How this :/
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Post by gems on Jan 24, 2009 20:21:41 GMT 1
Awesome! I love the idea and your editing/pose looks great =)
The only thing I can think of for improvement, is maybe her hair should be in movement?
The books/ flying pages is a great touch though! I love this entry, Mariam ;D
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Post by mariam? on Jan 26, 2009 16:52:25 GMT 1
How bout this?
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Post by gems on Jan 26, 2009 22:01:37 GMT 1
Gorgeous! Looks really, really great Mariam
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