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Post by bethann on Mar 7, 2009 20:33:35 GMT 1
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Post by Simply "V" on Mar 7, 2009 22:31:15 GMT 1
Just curious bethann, is English your second language? I ask because I found that reading your story was rather difficult. Everyone makes mistakes (that includes moi ) but you have a lot of spelling and punctuation errors in your story. If your audience is bogged down with deciphering your meaning from misspelled words and grammatical errors then chances are they won't stick around. Even with the best plot in the world, if your spelling, grammar and punctuation is off then you won't have as much success as you may like. I'd suggest getting a proof-reader the next go around. Please know that I mean this in the best possible spirit, please don't be offended.
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