Rae
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Post by Rae on Oct 26, 2008 17:04:31 GMT 1
Shattered glass
The window opens Into nothingness An abyss Alone and afraid Stands their souls Nothing moves except the shining drops of dew Shedding light onto the ground Which soaks up the moisture Hoping to give life To some insignificant soul The jagged edges of reality The hole in the floor Capturing the voices Strumming the strings of faith But their sound drowns in the air Taken over by nothing yet everything Feeling weak Brittle leaves fall the ground with a crack As they break through the window Leaving into nowhere What was once filled with color Has now been drained Sucked dry cruelly With crude sketches marked in the sharp edges Nothing makes sense Yet something fills the air Something that hides everything Just....a little...smirk That envelopes The shattered glass
EDIT: Umm, critisism (sp?) would be absolutely lovely.
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