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Post by Rae on Jun 20, 2008 2:54:31 GMT 1
I think it's good. It definately doesn't suck, but it can't be the best because you're writing it from the point of view of a 30 year old men....and I know that you're definately not a 30 year old man. Plus, the mind of a man works a lot differently than the mind of a woman. But, it is still very good.
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Post by morganesque. toodles. on Jun 20, 2008 3:22:15 GMT 1
Thanks, gracias, and díky. (English, Spanish, and Czech, hehe) Well, he's not thirty the whole time. In the very beginning he's about six or seven, then he's eighteen, then he's thirty. So I've decided he's going to be 18 when he wrote it. Because it'll seem a lot less... creepy for girls our age to be writing it. Hehe. Thanks again.
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