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Post by melaniee <3 on Feb 2, 2008 19:29:03 GMT 1
I love it Gems ! and I kind of like the idea of it twice, but I'd suggest making one of them fade, or something like that, and maybe close together ?
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Feb 2, 2008 22:19:17 GMT 1
Sort of like an "echo" effect? I agree, you might want to try that.
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Post by Simply "V" on Feb 2, 2008 22:45:16 GMT 1
Summer, I like the 1st one best! But maybe brighten the text, its gone dark. Gems! I'm diggin' the green. I also like the echo effect for the text. Winnie makes a very pretty corpse. Just a note though, I think Chess said no borders. Could you all please help me choose the best pic? I have four (in the first two she's committed suicide by poison, in the second an overdose by pills). I didn't want to add any text or mess w/her hair until I'm sure of which shot to use first. Thanks.
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Post by tiababy on Feb 2, 2008 23:24:56 GMT 1
I love the very first one, I just think thats the best one. I'm gonna start on mine soon, hopefully I got paintballing tomorrow ^.^
Edit actually I prefer the angle on the second one
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Feb 3, 2008 0:16:14 GMT 1
It's a lovely set design, but it's hard to tell exactly how she died.
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Post by tiababy on Feb 3, 2008 8:49:13 GMT 1
I think its pretty obvious as the poison bottle/pills are by her body but i think making it more obvious like have it smashed/spilled on the foor.
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Post by summer. on Feb 3, 2008 11:28:30 GMT 1
OOH V I love both of them, but I do agree with how maybe you need more pills or a spill or something.. EDIT: I think I'm going to use the 1st one, but just change a few things, like the text, maybe shrink the hair and stuff. EDIT EDIT: Right. I'm done. I cant be bothered to change anything else. :l
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Feb 3, 2008 14:05:21 GMT 1
That's great Summer! I can't think of anything else you might want to change anyway!
And V, it's true that you can see the poison and pills if you look for them, but if someone hadn't read the "Poison" or "Drug overdose" things you posted, they might not be able to tell. You should make them stand out more, maybe by putting a bottle in her hand.
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Post by gems on Feb 3, 2008 14:43:39 GMT 1
I really love the second one, Danni looks uber angelic btw, hardly recognized her lol and it kinda reminds me of a scene from Romeo and Juliette... and Summer your final one looks amazing! i totally love the pose oh and thanks for all the feedback guys, i think I'm gonna fiddle about with the end text a bit so it doesn't look too repetitive and thanks V for catching me out on the border thing, i totally missed that out in the rules I'll take it off in the final one which i post later
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Post by Simply "V" on Feb 3, 2008 15:39:40 GMT 1
You all are tops! I really appreciate the feed back. So, I'm going to choose the 2nd pic (Tia I like that angle best as well) and make the poison bottle bigger. I thought that the blood stains on her hanky and cup might make it a little more obvious but I can see how the bottle isn't as noticeble as it could be, thanks Alia for pointing that out. Summer, there's no need for anything furhter, its perfecto! I know that I said it once before but I just love the whole 'noirness' (not a word ) of it. Back to the drawing board I go... EDIT: I edited in the text, hair and hopefully made the cause of her death more obvious.
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Feb 3, 2008 17:40:48 GMT 1
gosh, beautiful Poem! I think it's perfect!
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Post by gems on Feb 3, 2008 18:38:57 GMT 1
I love the poem V, its a really nice touch! and the hair editing looks so good! totally love your entry
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melaniee <3
Energetic Enthusiast
it may sound absurd, but dont be naive. even heros have the right to bleed. </3
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Post by melaniee <3 on Feb 3, 2008 19:00:14 GMT 1
O: V I'm in LOVE (: I really do love it, but may I suggest a text change ? I like the idea of it in a script kind of way, but maybe something different ? Just my opinion.
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Post by Be! on Feb 3, 2008 20:02:52 GMT 1
Ok guys... tell me what you think! It's not my favorite... I can't figure out what else to do. And is it too big?
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Feb 3, 2008 21:10:07 GMT 1
Hmmm, it looks unrealistic to have her standing up, maybe she should be floating in the water? I NEED OPINIONS! SERIOUS OPINIONS! Hehe... this might be a little hard to understand...
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