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Post by Simply "V" on Feb 2, 2008 1:28:16 GMT 1
^Gems...sooo cool. They can't even wait until her body's gone before celebrating! I likey alot . Summer - I like the idea of showing what leads up to her murder. Very film noir . I'm wondering, is self-murder allowed? I'm sort of leaning towards 'over-dosing' now.
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Post by summer. on Feb 2, 2008 12:31:49 GMT 1
This could be it: Ideas?
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Post by Dr.Lucy-Rose is back on Feb 2, 2008 12:42:06 GMT 1
Sum sum that is amazing! The writting is hard to make out though ^^' And i think the hair should come down on her forehead a little more! Besides that i love it!
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Post by summer. on Feb 2, 2008 13:38:16 GMT 1
Thank you Luce (: This will probably be my final:
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Post by gems on Feb 2, 2008 13:46:32 GMT 1
I love it Summer! The second version looks so cool and i love the little extra touches like the lipstick on the pillow awesome entry!
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Post by Simply "V" on Feb 2, 2008 13:55:32 GMT 1
Oooo, what a tragic scene, I like it! But Summer there are two things that struck me. Her eyes are looking directly at the camera and it gives me the feeling that she's not dead. Maybe try using the 'side-glance' eyes? Or have her eyes closed? Second, the lamp(?) on the left looks as if its hanging in the air. Or is it a ceiling light? If so you may want to adjust it so that we can't see the top. I don't know maybe you shouldn't listen to me.
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Post by summer. on Feb 2, 2008 13:59:05 GMT 1
I really agree with you V. I was wondering why she looks as though she isnt dead, and its cause shes looking straight up. And ergh, dont get me started on that lamp :l I think I may just cut it out of the picture... EDIT: Ok ... so I closed her eyes... Does it help?
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Post by Simply "V" on Feb 2, 2008 14:06:46 GMT 1
That'd probably work. I can't wait to see the final pic .
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Post by Dr.Lucy-Rose is back on Feb 2, 2008 14:07:35 GMT 1
No Sum, I prefure her with eyes open
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Post by summer. on Feb 2, 2008 14:19:09 GMT 1
Argh ... Im a little confused. Bu the good news is I've got rid of the lamp. I have 2 finals now. 1 2
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Post by Dr.Lucy-Rose is back on Feb 2, 2008 14:21:12 GMT 1
Second one
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Feb 2, 2008 14:51:47 GMT 1
Naw, I like the first one. I think the text is pretty hard to read though, maybe it should be bigger. Also... I don't really know how to put this, but her right hand looks sort of... painted. Maybe if you added more shadows to it?
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Post by gems on Feb 2, 2008 17:06:41 GMT 1
Hmmm not sure which i prefer... i think i like her eyes open the best, thou i agree with V, maybe have her eyes looking sideways...both pics are great thou ;D and i've had another go at Winnie's entry: doesn't have to be the final one so critque would be mucho appreciated
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Post by summer. on Feb 2, 2008 18:11:47 GMT 1
I LOVE that Gems (: The idea behind it is great, if dark The only thing is the: except her. She wanted to see her dead. That double thing confused me. But its probably just me, heh
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Feb 2, 2008 18:43:56 GMT 1
Yeah, I agree. Once is enough. Other than that, it's great!
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