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Post by Rae on Mar 24, 2008 1:05:32 GMT 1
Just a little poem I wrote for one of my rounds in a contest that I really like now. It's an angel poem.
I am an optical illusion In the hearts of those deceased From the tender love we shared Filled with deceit and temptation Only to be ceased by death For angles must not love Under divine beauty Their hearts hold sharp The blade that kills love itself Love Be Loved Kill Love
Cupid’s arrow be deadly, hmm?
Basically it's about Valentine's day. The person in the contest is an angel who's really......well, out there. She's mischevious and outgoing and such. And for Valentine's day she entices a human boy to fall in love with her, but it's against the rule for angels to love humans and angels aren't even supposed to show themselves in front of humans, so she is ordered to kill him, which normally she would kill without a thought, but she really liked this boy so she's very sad about it.
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Post by Dr.Lucy-Rose is back on Mar 26, 2008 15:47:28 GMT 1
Thats really good! XD I love the last three lines!
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Post by Rae on Mar 27, 2008 0:19:16 GMT 1
Thanks!
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Post by morganesque. toodles. on Jun 19, 2008 21:54:28 GMT 1
*claps* Nice!!! I *really* like the beginning.
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Post by Rae on Jun 20, 2008 2:56:10 GMT 1
Thank you!
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