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Post by haughtysims on Mar 3, 2008 17:32:47 GMT 1
So I got dead last, pardon the pun, and I was curious as to how I could improve it. Judges comments will be PM'd to me later I hope.
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Post by gems on Mar 3, 2008 18:52:38 GMT 1
That looks awesome! i love her pose and the blood is added really well v. gruesome lol the only suggestion i can make is to move the text upwards (put the text at the top with the black sky behind it) otherwise that space above looks kinda empty... i love the 'JH' bit, that looks awesome but i personally would have moved it to that grave just above it or perhaps line it directly under it...up to you though oh and a border would just be the icing on the cake love the entry overall though ;D
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Post by haughtysims on Mar 3, 2008 18:59:48 GMT 1
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Mar 3, 2008 23:18:51 GMT 1
I agree that the text should be higher, and I'm a person who just can't stand plain text, so you could try some effects on it. The cutting out is a bit choppy, and the blood looks a little too transparent. Also, I think there's too much negative space (space with nothing in it). Sorry if I sound mean, but believe me when I say I had to look hard to find the faults. Overall, it's a very good picture! Again, sorry, but hey, we would never get better if we didn't know what to fix!
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Post by haughtysims on Mar 4, 2008 1:35:32 GMT 1
I have to agree. There's no weight to the figure or depth to the photo. I would like to know if anyone has any tips for making richer looking blood. I've been splotching on dark red with a Wet Heavy Media brush and then color burning the layer. Blood has that sort of gloss. Red Plastic filter seems too glossy.
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