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Post by Simply "V" on Feb 12, 2008 2:59:39 GMT 1
In this next addition to NQAL, Evan the 2nd generation heir will be heading off to college and of course there's plenty of angst before he goes. Please tell me which one you prefer. I value your opinions guys so constructive criticism will be much appreciated . Thanks
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Post by gems on Feb 12, 2008 21:18:16 GMT 1
I really like the 1st one V The only thing about it that i'd change, is to have Evan looking at us (being all rebellious lol ) and have Ben looking, like Charlie, towards Evan...apart from that i love it oh and i really wanted to proofread another section tonight but i've been so super busy that i'm gonna have to put it off another day...sorry V, i feel like i'm being so slow at getting back to you
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Post by *~*Alia*~* on Feb 13, 2008 1:20:46 GMT 1
I'm going to have to put in a vote for #1
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Post by Rae on Feb 13, 2008 21:39:34 GMT 1
Me too!
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Post by Simply "V" on Feb 15, 2008 2:14:25 GMT 1
Okie dokie, here's my decision - I think I'm going with number 1. I posted a poll on another forum and 11 out of 16 likes the second one better BUT the reason is that in #1 there's not enough 'interaction' between the three. Like you said gems. So I'm going to rework it (since that's my personal favorite as well) and try to combine the best of the two. Thanks very much ladies for your help ;D.
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