AJ
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Post by AJ on Aug 29, 2007 6:03:45 GMT 1
I entered a contest at another forum, and I need some help. The point is that they're supposed to be an extra in a movie. My idea is that Phil and his friends are going to be murder victims. Suggestions and constructive criticism would be much appreciated.
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Post by mariam? on Aug 29, 2007 11:04:18 GMT 1
It's a really good shot, but I don't think it focuses on Phil enough. Maybe a closer shot of him, or him being more in front in the middle of the road?
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Post by gems on Aug 29, 2007 14:37:31 GMT 1
Ooooo it's a really awesome idea (the knife in the corner looks really good) but, like Mariam said, Phil needs to be a lot closer (perhaps a scared expression). also, although i'm not staying if you are about to be murdered you should be wearing dull clothes, i have to just say that movies tend to be very careful with their costumes and Phil's rainbow t-shirt (although really cute) doesn't really go with the horror movie vibe. especially as everybody else is wearing dark clothes... normally an extra wouldn't be singled out like that good luck though!
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Post by AJ on Aug 29, 2007 17:51:20 GMT 1
Alright, thanks everybody. I redid my entry, what do you think? Ooooo it's a really awesome idea (the knife in the corner looks really good) but, like Mariam said, Phil needs to be a lot closer (perhaps a scared expression). I was actually going for unsuspecting murder victims, so I don't really wan't to put a scared expression.
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