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Post by gems on Jul 27, 2007 0:39:20 GMT 1
okay, this is my first cover attempt for my story...not sure if i like it though so i'm all ears for suggestions
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~AnGeL gIrL~
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Post by ~AnGeL gIrL~ on Jul 27, 2007 8:44:45 GMT 1
gosh! Great job. That looks so good even if it is the first one.
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Post by mariam? on Jul 27, 2007 10:11:11 GMT 1
I don't know if you meant it to look this way, but the colours kinda blend and I can't really focus on anything apart from the potions.
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Post by gems on Jul 27, 2007 10:13:09 GMT 1
hmm i did actually try and make the potions less noticable but they do still stand out...i'll fix that up and thanks for the feedback guys
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Post by gems on Jul 28, 2007 14:56:53 GMT 1
okay i changed it a bit. i wasn't loving the potion idea anymore so i did a different pose of the old man. hope this is better: any suggestions are welcome though
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Post by Simply "V" on Jul 28, 2007 22:49:37 GMT 1
Hmm, just noticed - you're title isn't very noticeable, it gets lost in the flames. The other pic w/the candles just below your text sort of points to the title. Maybe enlarge the text or raise it some?
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Post by gems on Jul 29, 2007 2:39:17 GMT 1
oh...i probably should have checked this thread again before i released it :X The story is out now but i wish i had edited the cover a bit more, you're right V: the title really doesn't stand out enough oh well, it'll have to do now.
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Post by Dr.Lucy-Rose is back on Jul 29, 2007 14:50:46 GMT 1
I don't think it matters cause the story is great!!!! Plus this cover is loads beter then what i would do!
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