I don't know what to do to fix this!

[*~*Alia*~*]

Blah this sucks! Anyway, I got past round two of that competition. This round you're supposed to show what your model was like as a child, only no changing her age. It's a "child at heart" kinda thing.



I worked hard on it and frankensteined a TON but there's still something I don't like about it. Anyway, what can I do to fix it? (No, I'm not changing the color scheme.)

[~AnGeL gIrL~]

It is great Alia!I really don`t know what to say you can add the bored it always helps!

[Dexter]

what comp? on what site?

also maybe tone down the bussy back round, make it in game? and then blur it. then make her in the middle smelling her rose but un blurred.

[- *Munchbunchs* -]

Yeah I like that idea Dex.

Problem
I have to agree there is so much going on in the background that it gets confusing and you don't have a focus point.
The background seems to blen into the dress because the dress is so simalar.

Fix:
What Dex said. Try to make it in-game and do the actual person un-blurred. Mabye add a boarder or somthing after thats done for a nice touch.

[Chess]

Yup, background is too busy. Try making it faded (lowering opacity on a white background) and see if that works out better. You can also try the 'glow' tutorial on the background, maybe it'd look nice.

[Dexter]

yes. that would look great!

[*~*Alia*~*]

K, is this better?



You guys were right, I really like this one. I'm going to submit it unless someone gives me a reason not to in the next few hours.

By the way... I picked this idea cause for some reason I wanted to do a frankensteining of a girl smelling a flower.

[Dexter]

much better... now im not so confused

[*~*Alia*~*]

Okay, I've submitted it (I know I didn't wait very long, but I have to go soon.)

[- *Munchbunchs* -]

Awsome. So much better.