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Post by Chess on Nov 27, 2006 21:19:10 GMT 1
This is the story I've been working on for quite a long time now. Or the prelude to it, at least. Genre: Action/Horror/Mystery Rating: PG-13 so far Click on the cover to read ![;)](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v610/LunaFeline/LinkDump/wink.gif) It's short, but hopefully captivating enough to wait for Chapter One ![:P](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v610/LunaFeline/LinkDump/tongue.gif) Edit: Chapter One is now out! Click the cover to read ![:)](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v610/LunaFeline/LinkDump/smile.gif) ![](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v610/LunaFeline/Cover.jpg)
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Post by mariam? on Nov 27, 2006 21:29:53 GMT 1
OOh, I loved it ![:D](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v610/LunaFeline/LinkDump/biggrin.gif) The description's great, and you leave it on a really good cliffhanger. Can't wait to read more!
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Post by Clauds on Nov 27, 2006 21:33:02 GMT 1
Ohh great... I'm reading right now ^^ the cover is awesome, by the way ![:)](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v610/LunaFeline/LinkDump/smile.gif)
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Post by Simply "V" on Nov 27, 2006 21:48:24 GMT 1
Its bookmarked and I'm eagerly awaiting the remaining story. ![:)](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v610/LunaFeline/LinkDump/smile.gif) The cover is simple and beautiful, its also different (very nice).
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Post by Casper is Back! on Nov 27, 2006 21:48:37 GMT 1
One word... AWESOME!!! I cant wait. Ive heard of a group like them. And I know theres a story called Danse Macabre somwhere else. Of that subjects. My brain needs more!!! That story is worth a nomination!
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Post by Chess on Nov 27, 2006 22:25:35 GMT 1
Thanks very much everyone! /blush
I'm so glad you like it, I really spent a lot of time slaving over it, hehe.
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Post by Clauds on Nov 27, 2006 22:31:18 GMT 1
er... I posted something, but it's gone! weird... I'll re-type it, then:
Just finished reading... it's great! It's obvious that you put a lot of effort into it, and it was all worthy!! awesome work, my friend ^_^
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Post by Casper is Back! on Nov 27, 2006 22:32:22 GMT 1
I agree!
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rionpie
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Post by rionpie on Nov 28, 2006 2:06:20 GMT 1
That was fan-tabular! Man, I love these kind of stories. And the pics really creeped me out, while reading the part about the phone call my brother dropped something and it made a big bang, and I practically jumped out of my skin. Awesome, can't wait for more.
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Mew
Acknowledged Amateur
Being an anime freak isn't a bad thing...
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Post by Mew on Nov 28, 2006 2:27:34 GMT 1
Awesomeness. I love the cover, by the way! Very cool! It also had an awesome cliffhanger. ^^
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Post by Chess on Nov 28, 2006 10:19:55 GMT 1
Thank you so much guys ![:D](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v610/LunaFeline/LinkDump/biggrin.gif)
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Rulelezz
Tasteful Tourist
Now you live in shadows and I live in lies.
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Post by Rulelezz on Nov 28, 2006 10:49:31 GMT 1
gosh gosh gosh!!!
That story is sure amazing!!! Beautiful clifhanger, got me wanting more! And your talent at editing, hwow.
I'm on the waiting list! =]
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Post by Dangerous Kat on Nov 28, 2006 12:11:47 GMT 1
gosh Cat! That was great! I can't wait to find out what happens...
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Post by tiababy on Nov 28, 2006 16:04:47 GMT 1
I'm going to read it now. There is a book written by larell K hamilton thats called Danse macabre ![:)](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v610/LunaFeline/LinkDump/smile.gif) Shes a vampire hunter in that book. Edit: gosh I loved it oh the way you ended it I so can't wait for the next part ![8-)](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v610/LunaFeline/LinkDump/ph34r.gif)
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Post by artfreak219 on Dec 4, 2006 1:26:51 GMT 1
I really like your story. Just read it! Amazing, and a really great cliffhanger.
Five stars and bookmarked...can't wait for more!
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